Showing posts with label anomaly. Show all posts
Showing posts with label anomaly. Show all posts

Friday, October 25, 2013

3-22. Real Life.

The Doctor and his holographic family.
THE PLOT

Voyager is en route to a science station run by the Vostigye, an apparently friendly race eager to rendezvous with them. When Voyager arrives at the coordinates, however, there is no space station - only debris. The station has been destroyed. 

It doesn't take long to discover that this was no attack, but rather a recurring spatial anomaly. Analysis shows that the event leaves behind plasma that could be mined to fuel the ship's systems. Tom goes out to begin extracting it - only for the anomaly to come back midway, sucking him right into the eye of the storm!

Meanwhile, the Doctor has decided to create a holographic family for himself, to allow him to experience family life. When he invites Kes and B'Elanna to meet them, both are left uncomfortable by how artificial and "perfect" this family is. Torres asks for permission to introduce a randomizer into the program to make the family more realistic and less ideal. The Doctor assents - only to find himself confronted with children he cannot control and, ultimately, with a tragedy he cannot bear to face!


CHARACTERS

Capt. Janeway: Finding the anomaly sparks her enthusiasm. Her response for calls to get away before it recurs is to wonder if they really should: "We've just witnessed a phenomenon none of us has ever heard of before, much less experienced... I think we owe it to ourselves to investigate." Once Tom is sucked in, though, her priority is clearly getting him out safely, with other considerations forgotten.

Doctor: Despite things going wrong with his last attempt to improve himself, the Doctor has continued to try to make himself relate better to the people on the ship. His holo-family is his latest experiment. He enjoys the first version, drinking in the adulation of his ideal Stepford family, and he is clearly shaken by what he finds after Torres changes the simulation. Still, he sticks with it and it's clear that he is more emotionally engaged with the more troubled variant he is left with. The Doctor tries to control his family the way he does his sickbay, which has predictably poor results - But the way he keeps thinking about the problems when "at work" shows that his failures are having more impact on him than the easy fantasy life he initially created.

Torres: Ever since the Doctor's Jekyll & Hyde incident, she has insisted on checking his program regularly - a sensible precaution. When she and Kes visit the Doctor's holo-family, Kes diplomatically says that they're a little too perfect. Torres is much blunter, laying into the Doctor's Stepford wife and kids as being completely unrepresentative of a real family. "This is a fantasy!" she all but shouts, amusingly dismissing the group as "lollipops." She calms down quickly, however, then volunteers to make the program more lifelike.

Tom Paris: Is quick to volunteer to take a shuttle to mine the plasma left by the anomaly. Even after he gets sucked into the anomaly, he is happy to have seen something so unique and describes it as "worth it... one wild ride!" When his risk-taking tendencies attract the ire of the newly-paternal Doctor, he pushes the Doctor to reveal what's wrong. When the Doctor tells him that he intends to never restart the program so that he won't have to deal with a family tragedy, Tom urges him to reconsider, telling him, "In the long run, you'll miss the whole point of what it means to have a family."


THOUGHTS

Thank God that Before & After came between "The Trilogy of Terror" and this.  Without that reminder of how good this show can be, so many weak entries clustered together might have been enough to make me quit this show.

There are a lot of reasons why this episode doesn't work for me, but the biggest one is how absolutely it represents one of Voyager's biggest faults: Jeri Taylor's script is easy.  It's attempts at comedy and drama alike are obvious.  Its attempts to evoke emotion are the grist of signposted, surface-level, Lifetime drama.  The result: Comedy moments that I don't find particularly funny, and drama that I don't find at all moving.  All further bogged down by a subplot in which the ship encounters yet another spatial anomaly - because we certainly haven't had enough of those yet, have we?

In reviewing Real Life, I'll parrot one of B'Elanna's criticisms of the Doctor's initial family: [I]"There is nothing wrong with your premise... It just needs a little tweaking to bring it closer to real life."[/I] The idea of giving the holographic Doctor a holographic family?  That could be used to develop his character.  But it shouldn't be one episode unto itself.  This family should have been introduced earlier in the season, seen in "B" plots and throwaway scenes across several episodes before this. Then, when it came time for that family to get its own episode ending in tragedy, the emotions would have real weight. 

By cramming all of this into a single episode, the family dynamic has to be introduced and developed within half an episode.  Then, around the subplot, there's only about 10 - 15 minutes left for the Doctor to deal with the tragedy.  Is it any surprise that Jeri Taylor resorts to surface-level tearjerker tactics?  We don't know this family or see them as "real" people - There just hasn't been time - and so all she can do is use heavy-handed manipulation to try to evoke a response.  For some viewers, I'm sure it worked well enough, and that's good for them because they got to enjoy an episode I didn't.  Because for me, I was too conscious of the puppeteer and her strings to feel a thing.

It should be said that Robert Picardo throws himself into this with his usual dedication, his performance possessing a subtety and credibility that the script itself lacks. The scene in which he confronts his son's Klingon friends about the true nature of the knife they are carrying is a strong "hero moment" for him, and he plays the episode's two hospital scenes with the right mix of emotion and suppression to get a lot more out of the material than it deserves. 

Unfortunately, just as the Doctor's holo-family never existed before this episode, I'm certain it will never again exist after. The events of this episode will be irrelevant to his character, and the episode itself will remain a pointless and not-very-entertaining one-off.

Not the worst Voyager I've seen, not even the worst I've seen lately, Real Life is nevertheless another sign of a show that has no clear ideas about what to do with itself from one episode to the next. Another exercise in heavy-handed sludge, from a series that's indulged in that far too often for my tastes.


Overall Rating: 4/10.

Previous Episode: Before & After
Next Episode: Distant Origin

Search Amazon.com for Star Trek: Voyager

Review Index

To receive new review updates, follow me:

On Twitter:

On Threads:

Sunday, August 21, 2011

2-06. Twisted.

"One pill makes you larger, and one pill makes you small..."

THE PLOT

It's Kes' birthday. The sweet and pretty Ocampan girl has just turned two, and the crew has thrown her a surprise party in the holodeck. Tom gives her a gift that's a little too nice for just friendship, prompting barely-suppressed jealousy from Neelix. Neelix gives her a cake and won't shut up about it. And the writers? Well, this is a Voyager episode, so what else would you expect: A spatial anomaly!

Yes, another one.

Soon, the Voyager crew are wandering the ship's corridors, desperately searching for the bridge and engineering. But the corridors are reshaping themselves around them. Rooms are in the wrong place, and all halls lead straight back to the holodeck. And the distortion is getting worse, threatening to crush the ship in an implosion wave!


CHARACTERS

Capt. Janeway:
Appreciates Harry's enthusiasm for his job, and calls the ensign one of "the bright spots of this mission." I'm going to guess the anomaly is already affecting her brain when she says this, as I can honestly come up with no other explanation - at least, none that doesn't involve the captain hitting on a young crewmember. Janeway displays genuine fondness for Kes, almost maternal as she embraces the Ocampa at her birthday party.

Chakotay: Manages to keep his cool throughout the crisis. When Tuvok attempts to deal with the shifting corridors in a rigidly logical fashion, Chakotay points out the flaw in the Vulcan's plan: Namely, that the "right hand rule" doesn't work too well in a labyrinth that is constantly changing shape. He does show some resentment toward Tuvok, and his calm frays when he cuts off Tuvok's arguing at one point. I'd say he hasn't really forgiven the Vulcan for what he still doubtless sees as a betrayal. But the two acknowledge each other's merits at the episode's end, which presumably means that even this potentially interesting ember of character tension has been firmly stamped out.

Torres: Her Klingon nature shows itself in her determination to fight the anomaly. When Tuvok points out that her plan to counter the implosion with an explosion might destroy them all, her counter is that if she's going to die anyway, she'd rather die fighting. Even when it becomes clear that there is no way to fight off the effect, Torres is the last to surrender. She does show consistent trust and loyalty toward Chakotay, though. Nice to see Kenneth Biller, at least, remembering that these two were part of the same crew long before joining Voyager.

Tuvok: Attempts to approach the inexplicable with rigid logic, which doesn't work very well. He comes as close as he ever could to admitting a sort of resentment at Janeway's choice of Chakotay as first officer, and apologizes for any difficulties he may have created for Chakotay. A nice nonverbal beat shows his closeness for Janeway, when he reaches for her - stopping just short of making physical contact - just as the distortion hits.

Kes: Another good nonverbal beat sees the Doctor pulling Kes into a comforting embrace just before the anomaly hits, taking onto himself a paternal role toward her (not for the first time). Kes clearly loves Tom's gift and tries hard to ignore Neelix's evident jealousy. She comes up with a good solution at the end, accepting the gift but literally integrating Neelix into it.

Neelix: Continues to feel jealousy at Tom Paris' friendliness toward Kes. Honestly, given the gift Tom gives, I'm not sure this bit of jealousy is entirely unreasonable.  It's also clear enough that Neelix feels guilty at his inability to control his jealousy. But he's just so irritating that it's impossible to empathize with him for long. Particularly when he expands his jealousy of Tom to include random crew members, or when he gets smug about Kes' sense of direction. This episode also sees both Chakotay and the doctor express annoyance with him (Chakotay nonverbally, the doctor aloud) - meaning that the writers know that he's irritating. So if they can bring themselves to acknowledge this by having the other characters express it, why don't they do something to address the problem?


THOUGHTS

As a character episode, Twisted has some merit. Kenneth Biller's script does a good job of dividing the regulars into pairs, drawing on the character relationships established in previous episodes. So we see Tom and Harry's friendship, with Tom placing a comforting hand on the younger man's shoulder; Kes and Neelix, made even more firmly a couple as Kes asks for a photo of him to keep with her; Kes and the Doctor, as a sort of surrogate father/daughter; Janeway and Tuvok; and Chakotay and Torres. Several good character beats are sprinkled through the story, particularly Chakotay's talk to Neelix about the risks of love and Torres' refusal to stop fighting until the very end. It really is one of the better attempts at an ensemble piece, with every regular getting a page.

Unfortunately, as a story, it feels utterly pointless.

The corridors are rearranging themselves, meaning that the characters wander around aimlessly for a bit before ending up back at the holodeck. For about half the episode, that's enough. It's an intriguing starting point for a story, and there's something appealingly nutty about the corridors rearranging themselves. But by the 20 minute mark, the novelty value is wearing thin. At that point, the story needs to shift in some way.

But no. Other than kick-starting the Artificial Tension Generator by making it seem that the distortion may destroy the ship (spoiler alert: It doesn't), that turns out to be the entire plot. Wander around some corridors until ending up back in the holodeck. Discuss situation. Wander around some corridors before ending up back in the holodeck. Repeat. Some of the distortion effects are nice - I particularly like an effects shot late in the episode, in which the regulars are reduced to something like a cubist painting. But it's just not enough to sustain a one-hour show, and there really isn't anything else here.

I think Twisted would have been a terrific 22-minute TAS episode. But at 45 minutes, it becomes awfully tiresome. It gets a couple points for the character material, and a couple more for the appealing nuttiness of the setup. Ultimately, however, it just ends up as an exercise in pointlessness.


Overall Rating: 4/10.

Previous Episode: Non Sequitur
Next Episode: Parturition

Search Amazon.com for Star Trek: Voyager

Review Index

To receive new review updates, follow me:

On BlueSky:

On Threads:

Sunday, August 14, 2011

2-05. Non Sequitur.

Harry gets a surprising wake-up.


THE PLOT

Harry Kim awakens to find himself in San Francisco, with his fiancee, Libby (Jennifer Gatti), and a steadily advancing Starfleet career. It is not a dream: It's too vivid, everything is too solid. It's also not the past. It's the present. A present in which Harry Kim was not assigned to Voyager, and was therefore able to continue in his Earth-bound life. It's not some alien projection or hallucination. Reality itself has changed, and in Harry's favor.

But Harry can't help but look the gift horse in the mouth. Told that his best friend had taken his place on Voyager, Harry finds himself compelled to search the crew manifest. Finding that Tom Paris also never made it onto Voyager in this timeline, he can't help but visit Tom. The combination of accessing restricted files and visiting a Maquis convict brings Harry to the attention of Starfleet authorities, and Harry soon finds himself suspected of being a Maquis spy.

Now the only way left to secure a future that doesn't involve prison is to find a way back to his own reality - a slim hope, unless he can convince the bitter, dissipated Tom to help him!


CHARACTERS

Capt. Janeway: Comes up with some Technobabble to boost the transporter's signal in order to attempt beaming Harry out of the anomaly. Otherwise largely absent, though her effect on Tom is evident when the alternate Tom tells Harry that Janeway's offer was a lot more attractive than the life he faced without the Voyager mission. We also learn that after Tom got into trouble on Deep Space 9 in this alternate timeline, Janeway did attempt to secure his release. Even at that early point, she had enough loyalty to him as a member of her crew that she didn't just fly off without him, even though doing so would have been fully justified.

Harry Kim: Writer Brannon Braga turns the spotlight on Harry... and we get to see that he really is as bland and wooden as he seems! Wang's performance is, frankly, wretched. Wooden as oak, stiff as rigor-mortis personified. If this episode centered on either Tom or Janeway, I have no doubt that it would be compelling stuff. But just by being a Harry Kim episode, it's crippled - and the fault this time lies not with writer Brannon Braga, whose script tries very hard to fill in some of the blanks of Harry's character. No, this time the fault lies squarely with Garrett Wang, who is given a real chance to shine - but who just plain isn't up to the challenge.

Tom Paris: Robert Duncan McNeill has some fun playing the disipated Tom Paris of this alternate timeline. Tom has continued on the path set for him before Janeway made her offer, and he's much farther gone than he was at the start of Caretaker. When we first see him - much too late into the episode - he's drunken and embittered, but there's still a spark of something that makes him listen to Harry's story about an alternate reality. Though he shuts down once Harry mentions taking him back to Starfleet, suspecting some sort of trap, he is intrigued enough that he obviously asks some questions of some of his remaining friends, enabling him to help Harry at the crucial moment.


THOUGHTS

A Harry-centric episode. Given Harry's general blandness, along with the quality of the last Harry episode, I couldn't help but brace for the worst.

The good news is, Non Sequitur isn't half-bad. It's well-produced and nicely helmed by director David Livingston.  It's rather a relief to get footage that is actually outside for a change! There are some good scenes and entertaining moments, and the entire first Act - in which we are just as confused as Harry as to what is going on here - is just extremely well-done.

The bad news is, the episode never really manages to build on that. Harry's character remains as flat and dull as ever. Jennifer Gatti, as Harry's fiancee, is even more wooden than Garrett Wang - which in a way makes them the perfect couple, but certainly doesn't make them a very watchable or interesting pair on screen. Their scenes together drag the episode to a screeching halt, and it takes a very long time for the story to build up any momentum at all.

The story does manage to spark some interest in the late going, once Tom Paris enters the action. Robert Duncan McNeill has shown that he can do well when given good material, and Paris' scenes provide some quite good material - yet another reason why I wish this had been Tom's episode, as Tom's alternate timeline is far more interesting than Harry's.  But Tom doesn't really enter into the episode until well past the halfway mark, meaning that there is a lot of relatively dull material to get through before things start taking off.

Passable without ever really living up to its potential, the best that I can say for Non Sequitur is that it's well-made. But with a weak central actor leaving a void at the heart of the episode, there's nothing terribly compelling on a character level. I didn't have a bad time watching this story. But I never cared about the story, or about Harry, which leaves this another weak episode of a thus-far very disappointing second season.


Overall Rating: 5/10.

Previous Episode: Elogium
Next Episode: Twisted

Search Amazon.com for Star Trek: Voyager

To receive new review updates, follow me:

On BlueSky:

On Threads: